14 May 2006
Odd brain
Alchemy needs a prologue. A 'how the two main characters met under dire circumstances' prologue.
I am so becoming the prologue queen *sigh*, but Varo doesn't pop up until the end of chapter three. I think the reader needs to see him in action and that would help with Alesh's motivation... and her general obsession, hehe

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