14 May 2006

Odd brain

So I'm dutifully typing out chapter three of Bone Magician... and enjoying how annoying Jarod can be, LOL and it hits me. Out of nowhere.

Alchemy needs a prologue. A 'how the two main characters met under dire circumstances' prologue.

I am so becoming the prologue queen *sigh*, but Varo doesn't pop up until the end of chapter three. I think the reader needs to see him in action and that would help with Alesh's motivation... and her general obsession, hehe
posted by Kim Knox at 4:12 pm

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